Constructive Criticism
Seems like you should revise before posting this.
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| Author: | kman120 [ 31 Mar 2009, 15:42 ] |
| Post subject: | saji smiths jornal. |
entry one /me enters the city from the airport. I dont know what happend i have bin trying to contact my dad for hours Jon smith. Jon came to the city to investigate the death of his brother carl smith. i walked around town for awile and came to the in and out. I here screeming comeing from somewhare it sounded like my dads. i find a nokia on the ground and looked at it. it was my dads. it was shooting a video. i stoped it and looked at the video and i was shocked. it showed my dad haveing a duel with a unamed man. my dad lost and was draged into the wharehouse next to the in and out. in the video you could here him screeming. you also herd people lafing. they obiosly knew the Jon. they said how dose that feel Jon eh? and then a gunshot. i kept watching tell the part i picked it up he never came out. "I am now seeing the darkness that harms this city" i said to myself. with my famlys katna my back i begin walking back to the hotel. and start makeing my dinner. "better find some awnsers" say to myself in a angry tone. and begin wrigting in my jornal. *entry #2* "luckly i escaped death tonight i slipped out unoticed but bleeding. ugh the thoght of that night terified me netherless loseing someone you love. luckly i had some supplys to clean myself up but the strange events flash in my mind. i better lay low as "Jon Rumi". |
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| Author: | kman120 [ 31 Mar 2009, 19:27 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
someone coment |
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| Author: | johndelgado [ 01 Apr 2009, 10:18 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
how many brothers do you have? |
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| Author: | Wake [ 01 Apr 2009, 14:15 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
Every person in the world with a last name that is Smith (over 9000!) |
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| Author: | kman120 [ 02 Apr 2009, 16:52 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
(( vigita how many smiths are in rp)) ((its over 9000!)) |
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| Author: | Slippy [ 02 Apr 2009, 17:20 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
(( Why won't you die? D:< )) |
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| Author: | kman120 [ 02 Apr 2009, 18:17 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
((well that wasent nice)) |
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| Author: | Zurrag [ 05 Apr 2009, 21:25 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
Slippy wrote: (( Why won't you die? D:< )) (( ROFLMAO. )) |
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| Author: | Chris Jacobs [ 07 Apr 2009, 00:15 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
Teh Saji cant die ive tried lol jk |
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| Author: | RoronoaZorro94 [ 07 Apr 2009, 07:37 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
((Guys I think you need to stop ck smith I dont think Saji like that. And Dont ck all the time its getting boring then. Try to rp better instead.)) |
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| Author: | kman120 [ 07 Apr 2009, 18:34 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
((thank you for agreeing zoro.)) |
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| Author: | gordanfisherman [ 07 Apr 2009, 19:42 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
RoronoaZorro94 wrote: ((Guys I think you need to stop ck smith I dont think Saji like that. And Dont ck all the time its getting boring then. Try to rp better instead.)) I think you might be directing that comment towards the wrong people. |
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| Author: | Bloodstruck7 [ 12 Apr 2009, 20:34 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
(( Haha Gordan )) |
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| Author: | khatool [ 13 Apr 2009, 07:51 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
Slippy wrote: (( Why won't you die? D:< )) ((Because beneath this mask there is more than just flesh, Mr. Creedy, there is an idea, and ideas, are bulletproof. |
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| Author: | Chris Jacobs [ 10 May 2009, 17:44 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
Saji is cool and alot of people want him dead, but why do they want him dead? |
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| Author: | swissmiss [ 27 May 2009, 20:00 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
Constructive Criticism Seems like you should revise before posting this.
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| Author: | Chris Jacobs [ 29 May 2009, 09:10 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
what? |
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| Author: | Maxwell Murder [ 29 May 2009, 11:10 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
swissmiss was saying that Saji aka Kman should have revised his story before he posted, as with every other message he's posted in the past... |
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| Author: | Slippy [ 29 May 2009, 19:19 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
Maxwell Murder wrote: swissmiss was saying that Saji aka Kman should have revised his story before he posted, as with every other message he's posted in the past... This. |
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| Author: | Chris Jacobs [ 05 Jun 2009, 12:10 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
ah now i get it |
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| Author: | kman120 [ 15 Jul 2009, 05:57 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
((Hey everyone! Its me Kman Just thought id, let you know whats going on.I got a brand new comp, improved my grammer, and now im rejoining TSRP.)) |
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| Author: | Chris Jacobs [ 01 Dec 2009, 16:09 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
woo hoo |
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| Author: | Johnny5 [ 02 Dec 2009, 04:14 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
few months off homie |
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| Author: | Bloodstruck7 [ 20 Dec 2009, 18:11 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: saji smiths jornal. |
((Epic. Fail.)) |
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