Your ability to follow the format is outstanding
Edit the parts that are wrong (read the app format again and it will be very obvious what you did wrong) and I'll get back to you.
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| Author: | Slippy [ 09 Feb 2009, 21:29 ] |
| Post subject: | Zachary's Application |
Name: Zachary 'Slippy' Vivalldi Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:21853374 Character Age: 29 Character Background/History/How you know about the Mafia: Coming from iBurgh as a simple Mafioso under the family name of "Vivalldi", he needed to find something new. So he made his way to NukeCity, a city full of criminals and thugs. Only bringing a suitcase full of cloths, no money, no identification, nothing. He had no where to go, so he slept in the NukeCity park and begged for money when he wasn't getting jumped by Yakuza. As you could tell, he wasn't welcomed by the Asian community in Nuke. They jumped him, threatened him, even on a few occasions, cut him just to watch him bleed. Until one day, he was sitting on a bench in the park, minding his own buisness. He saw a man dressed in all black, and a pair of shades walk up the side walk. Zachary knew this man was quite odd, but he didn't know why. Maybe the cloths? Maybe the shades in darkness? He watched as this man made his way up the road to a lonesome Yakuza member. All Zachary can remember was hearing the sound of a Golden Colt pound a bullet out of the golden barrel. And seeing that strange man run off with a devilish smirk across his face. After a short investigation from the Police, Zachary came to learn that it was the work of the so called "Mafia". He seemed interested, as he could relate to them. He wanted a way in.. What you offer: I offer a hand that will kill for your own personal pleasure. I offer a hand that will deal death to your rivals by saying one word. I offer my vast knowledge and skill of being in a family of murderers, and a shield from the bullet that will strike you down. I offer you my reliable assets and attributes. I offer you me, Zachary Vivalldi. Why you want to Join: I want to join because, I am looking for a new life in Nuke. I am looking for protection from Yakuza scum. I am looking for a way to make good money by doing what I love. And I am looking for a way to wipe Yakuza out of NukeCity permenant like. Other Servers You've Played On/TSRP Experience: Iv'e played on so many Iv'e forgotten names except a few. Dest's RP, Sakura TSRP, Triads RP, and WhiteCastle RP, and at the moment, I am currently playing in Inferno's RP. I can assure you that you will be happy with my RP skills. I have been playing for the course of almost 5 years now. Anything Else (OOC or IC) That you Think is Relevent: Don't edit my post, SNukuh! D: |
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| Author: | Eric [ 10 Feb 2009, 00:05 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
Your ability to follow the format is outstanding Edit the parts that are wrong (read the app format again and it will be very obvious what you did wrong) and I'll get back to you. |
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| Author: | Supernuker [ 10 Feb 2009, 01:13 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
I fixed something in the app for you slippy.. see if I can find what I did =D |
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| Author: | Brain [ 10 Feb 2009, 05:17 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
Bad Nuker! I see what you did! |
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| Author: | Slippy [ 10 Feb 2009, 10:35 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
Supernuker wrote: I fixed something in the app for you slippy.. see if I can find what I did =D Hah.. I see what you did.  I'ma tazer your ass. |
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| Author: | Supernuker [ 10 Feb 2009, 17:08 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
=D |
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| Author: | Brain [ 10 Feb 2009, 17:08 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
Too bad only PD can use tazers. 
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| Author: | Slippy [ 10 Feb 2009, 17:17 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
Brain wrote: Too bad only PD can use tazers. You make me feel tons better.. 
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| Author: | Eric [ 10 Feb 2009, 19:56 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
The edit is quite nice, very nice job on the IC parts. See Shadow or Deebz in game (Shadow still hasn't jobrighted me yet...) |
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| Author: | Slippy [ 10 Feb 2009, 20:13 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Zachary's Application |
Eric wrote: The edit is quite nice, very nice job on the IC parts. See Shadow or Deebz in game (Shadow still hasn't jobrighted me yet...) Thank you, and alright. |
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