Well, i have edited it now. Sorry
But, what is wrong with my background history? :O
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| Author: | Jason Wreck [ 31 Jan 2009, 19:02 ] |
| Post subject: | Jason Wreck Mafia Application |
Name: Jason Wreck. Steam ID: Character Age: 23. Character Background/History/How you know about the Mafia: Jason Wreck lived much of his life alone with his mother. His dad got had been in the russian mafia, but got killed during a gang war in Moskva. Jason and his mother fled to America, where they lived hiding from their past. But no one can hide forever, and after 6 years in US, when Jason was 14, was the peace over. They shot Jason's mother on the street, but Jason managed to get away. He lived on the streets for 3 years. He was involved in much criminality during these years, simply for the reason for surviving. When he got the age of 17, he decided to find new experiences in a new city. He heard from some friends, that there was some organized criminality going on, and decided to check it out. What you offer: I offer 100% loyality. I would die for the people I'm friends with, no matter what. Also, I'm a very good shooter. I would do anything for the people I serve, even shoot a policeofficer if nescesary. Why you want to Join: Jason Wreck had maked way to much criminality to get another job, so why not continue? Also, he knew that organized crime was a good way to make money, instead of the amateur criminality he had maked earlier. Other Servers You've Played On/TSRP Experience: Well, several others. I played on a server called Bad Habits once, but I think it closed down for some months ago. Also, i have played/still playing on a server called Martial Law. I have been in the PD alot in my time in TSRP, but I also got some experiences with drugdealing, and other criminality. Anything Else (OOC or IC) That you Think is Relevent: |
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| Author: | Eric [ 31 Jan 2009, 22:26 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jason Wreck Mafia Application |
No one ever gets this right. "THE WHAT YOU OFFER" SECTION IS IC AS IS THE "WHY YOU WANT TO JOIN" SECTION. ACTUALLY READ THE WHOLE APPLICATION FORMAT BEFORE MAKING AN APP Seriously, out of the 10+ apps we've had ONE of them has actually correctly followed the format. And your story is awful stereotypical TSRP e thug but that can be overlooked if you edit the app to be correct. |
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| Author: | Jason Wreck [ 01 Feb 2009, 06:49 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jason Wreck Mafia Application |
Well, i have edited it now. Sorry But, what is wrong with my background history? :O |
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| Author: | Mark Lee [ 01 Feb 2009, 07:28 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jason Wreck Mafia Application |
Wheres your Steam ID? |
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| Author: | Eric [ 01 Feb 2009, 22:19 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jason Wreck Mafia Application |
Steam ID really isn't that important for the app, sometimes admins like giving jobs via SQL for some reason so it helps them in that case. Don't worry about the Steam ID. And as for back story, nothing is really "wrong" with it but everyone and their brother in TS is the son/daughter/sibling of a powerful mafioso who is killed in a gang war and then they end up joining a gang to avenge their death. I would sort of like to see someone who isn't a hardened criminal from birth. But yeah, rest of the app looks good so I'd give you an ACCEPTED |
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| Author: | Supernuker [ 02 Feb 2009, 00:48 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jason Wreck Mafia Application |
Eric wrote: sometimes admins like giving jobs via SQL Head Jobs (Police Chief, Mafia Don, etc) and the Mayor require steamids to give the jobs out, so head admins don't have to wait for the person to get on to do it. However, except in EXTREME circumstances, I will not be giving jobs via sql. |
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| Author: | Eric [ 03 Feb 2009, 02:07 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Jason Wreck Mafia Application |
Right, hence the "isn't really that important" part. |
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