One down. Several more mistakes to go, Chief.
I'll even give ya a hint. One of them is another math error.
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| Author: | Devin Hester [ 24 Jan 2009, 22:47 ] |
| Post subject: | Devin Hester's App |
Name: Devin Hester Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:1518202 Character Age: 23 Character Background/History/How you know about the Mafia: John Morris used to be a Police officer, he then found a big crime scene in Detriot, He traveled to Detriot in under 21 hours (coming from NY). When he arrived, he had an hour to get to the crime scene. At the bank, he found out that he was the only person there. He tried to call for backup but all of the officers told him that since he was so independent, then he can handle it on his own. Furiously, he threw his phone into a nearby lake. He was then surrounded by tons of Mafia members and was taken hostage, they told him that he was to become one of them or die, he changed his name to Devin Hester and chose to join the Mafia. Expecting something on the NEWS at the Mafia's "Crib", nothing was reported and nobody ever knew what happened to John Morris. What you offer: I can offer a boost in better crime scenes and I can also take hostages, robberies, etc. Why you want to Join: I want to join the Mafia because i was betrayed by the PD and when i was a Police Officer, watching bank robbers rob banks was interesting, espiacally when they got away. I think i would really love making crime scenes like robbing and taking people hostage. Other Servers You've Played On/TSRP Experience: Martial-Law RP Lost Heaven RP FISK CITY RP Plenty more (Forgot the names) Anything Else (OOC or IC) That you Think is Relevent: Nope o.o |
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| Author: | Maxwell Murder [ 25 Jan 2009, 01:48 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Aside from several other mistakes you are making in your application, which I will try not to hold against you, I will have you know that it takes 5 hours to get from NYC to Rochester, NY, driving at the speed limit, at least. Driving to Detroit in 5 hours? No, I don't think it's possible. |
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| Author: | Wake [ 25 Jan 2009, 07:24 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
But there was a TIME PARADOX! Plus the speed limit was OVER 9000! |
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| Author: | Zurrag [ 25 Jan 2009, 19:15 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Honestly, I don't think Fisk should be a creditable place to name. I've played there a few times and it was horrible. |
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| Author: | Eric [ 25 Jan 2009, 23:15 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Why does no one keep the da*n app in character like it says? The WHOLE thing is IC, not just the Background part. And personally, if I was taken hostage by a bunch of mafiosos in a poorly-concevied background story, I would probably stick with the PD and not join them. |
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| Author: | Devin Hester [ 01 Feb 2009, 21:24 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Err.. Less Complaining much? I'd like to know if it gets accepted or denied o.o I edited it... Happy? O.o |
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| Author: | Eric [ 01 Feb 2009, 22:20 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
It's still wrong. Your "Why I want to Join" and "What I bring" sections are STILL ooc. |
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| Author: | Maxwell Murder [ 01 Feb 2009, 22:40 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
And it still says you drove to Detroit from NYC in under 5 hours. Do you have a rocket car? |
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| Author: | Mikhail Zhukov [ 02 Feb 2009, 07:05 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Why are you so obsessed with his mathematical error? |
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| Author: | Maxwell Murder [ 02 Feb 2009, 18:58 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Because it's an error, regardless of the type, and it shows the amount, or lack, of thought that went into the story. |
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| Author: | Devin Hester [ 03 Feb 2009, 22:10 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
There, holy s*it, 21 hours good enough? This isnt math class.... |
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| Author: | Maxwell Murder [ 03 Feb 2009, 23:22 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
One down. Several more mistakes to go, Chief. I'll even give ya a hint. One of them is another math error.
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| Author: | Eric [ 04 Feb 2009, 00:01 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
...Are you even in the Mafia Maxwell? |
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| Author: | Maxwell Murder [ 04 Feb 2009, 01:13 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Nope. Why? Would you prefer that I not post here? |
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| Author: | Mikhail Zhukov [ 04 Feb 2009, 11:15 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
S**t's gettin real! |
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| Author: | perlov0 [ 04 Feb 2009, 12:59 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Stop spamming threads with irrelevant details Mikhail. If it helps people, go ahead and post it.. But s*it like 'Shits getting real' needs to be thought, maybe said aloud, but for god's sake it should not be posted. |
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| Author: | Eric [ 04 Feb 2009, 14:56 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Maxwell Murder wrote: Nope. Why? Would you prefer that I not post here? Kind of. Especially since you won't let me post in any threads from n00bs asking for orgs. Nah I'm just kidding you can post all you want. As for Devin, we'll talk more in game, look for me or Shadow or someone else high ranking and we'll figure something out. |
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| Author: | Maxwell Murder [ 04 Feb 2009, 18:33 ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Devin Hester's App |
Well I understand either way, and that particular instance when I deleted your post was because it was particularly harsh, though that isn't to say I didn't agree with you 100% (which I actually meant to put in the message I left when I edited it). Either way, I try to know my role in this community, and when it comes to applications, I tend to just make remarks on people's roleplaying talent. |
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