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PostPosted: 23 Jan 2009, 20:37 
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Name: Chris Key

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:2820265 0 00:15 270 1

Character Age: 25 Years old.

Character Background/History/How you know about the Mafia: My character, Chris Key, was walking casually into the bank when the bank was robbed by a Mafia member, held hostage and later found out by the police that this "outlaw" was a a mafia member. Chris Key has been a police officer in three cities, in Iburg, Mecklenburg " in Casey Jones' server", and two others that I cannot remember the names. He has also been a mafia member and a hitman. He has also owned a bank orginization.

What you offer: I offer to be a good member and to be on most of the time. I will RP well and help out the orginization in anyway. I also can be helpful by donating my money "ingame money" for the orginization use.

Why you want to Join: I want to join the mafia because it sounds like a fun and good RP org. It would also help me to get use to RPing as a mafia member after a year break to play Counter Strike 1.6 and Diablo II. I also want to join because the members seem nice to play with, and talk to.

Other Servers You've Played On/TSRP Experience: Casey Jones' server "old server", Nightville RP, and a few others that were up about a year ago. Played for about a year, but then quit for a year.

Anything Else (OOC or IC) That you Think is Relevent: I am 15 years old, RPed for a year, then went to CS 1.6 and diablo II for a year. I am usually on every every other weekday and sometimes weekends. I think I could be a good member to add to this Mafia Orginization. Thank you for reading my App.! PS just started playing on this server about a week ago.


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PostPosted: 23 Jan 2009, 21:24 
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Joined: 03 Jun 2006, 15:32
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For the love of God why does no one actually read the app format before posting? It clearly says
Mafia Application App wrote:
The whole application is IC except for the obviously ooc parts (like Steam ID and how long you've been playing for).

at the top. That means post as if you were your character. Do not post about other servers or whatever except in that one section. Your character background mixes ooc and IC, and it's very obvious you haven't put any thought in your character at all, judging from the wildly different jobs from every end of the legal spectrum that your character has supposedly done all at the age of 25. The IC story also sucks, it isn't plausible in the slightest. If I was held hostage in a robbery by a mafia I sure as hell would want nothing to do with them.

Shadow is considerably nicer than I am so you might still have a shot, but on the off chance you do get accepted don't give me a reason to CK you.

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