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Rorschach
 Post subject: Rorschach's Journal
PostPosted: 08 Mar 2009, 12:50 
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Entry #1
Friday the 6th March, 2009
This city is a raging cesspool of sex, murder, and a sick sense of justice.
They've turn their backs on me and I'm going to be the one who breaks it.

Entry #2
Saturday the 7th March, 2009
The moon sets on this city, unable to look at the sins and shame it represents.
I long for the days when the stars light pierce through the thick smog of pestilence.

Entry #3
Sunday the 8th March, 2009
Raining again tonight.
Raining a lot lately like heaven is trying to wash away all of the city's sins.
Waste of time.
Steel wool couldn't scour clean this city's soul.

Entry #4
Wednesday the 11th March, 2009
Slaughtered many.
Felt no remorse.
No guilt.
Deserved it for all I cared.
They don't pity either.
No compassion.
With their distasteful eyes
and a lingering stench of death in their breath.
Just like the city they infest.

Entry #5
Friday the 13th March, 2009
Theres a picture of me in the news paper.
I can imagine the sniveling swines running to the cops
wanting their dirty money.
Even if what they say is false.
Unbelievable.
They think I'm one of them.
A criminal.
This city is afraid of me.
I've seen its true face.

Entry #6
Saturday the 14th March, 2009
Escaped death.
Odd feeling.
Like the world seems anew for a second.
But then I realize the horrors are still there.
Because theres still running.
Running from the people I protect.

Entry #7
Sunday the 15th March, 2009
A hero dies tonight.
Never crossed anyones minds.
I walk the streets again.
Looking...
Looking for what?
Love?
Was offered Swedish love
and French love...but not American love.
American love; like Coke in green glass bottles...they don't make it anymore.

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that was prutty good

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((Updated since last time. Sorry if you hate that I bumped it up but thought I could enlighten you with my thoughts.))
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exelent!!!!!!! :D

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(( Now that I'm beginning to understand the whole story behind this... I just came. But in all seriousness, THANK YOU for serving up a crime-based scenario that is rather original albeit adapted from a well-known story.

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//Interesting stuff. Blatantly ripped-off characters are common, and the fact you actually just plucked a character out of a movie/graphic novel is little different; what sets you apart, is you do it with class. Good job, and keep it up. I was a vigilante once, and it was hard work.

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((Thanks Maxwell and Praphet I do my best. With the little support of some people is nice. One day if any you decide to vigilante maybe we could work together hehe. You guys are great RPers so you'd make it a funny alliance.))

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((Haha, I ought to just think up a psychopathic arch nemesis or something. That's more my style.))

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((Haha, it would be an honor to fight against such an articulate villain.))

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((Kovacs you little suck up. :D. SEE YOU AT SCHOOL.))

Where did I find this?

/me throws away.

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((Suck up? I don't even know who he is in game... I'm just being courteous you arse. See ya in school.))

/me takes the book out of the trash and tucks away to prevent it from being lost again.
says, "Hurm."

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Rorschach wrote:
((Thanks Maxwell and Praphet I do my best. With the little support of some people is nice. One day if any you decide to vigilante maybe we could work together hehe. You guys are great RPers so you'd make it a funny alliance.))

// I can haz alliance buddy?

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Mikhail Zhukov wrote:
Rorschach wrote:
((Thanks Maxwell and Praphet I do my best. With the little support of some people is nice. One day if any you decide to vigilante maybe we could work together hehe. You guys are great RPers so you'd make it a funny alliance.))

// I can haz alliance buddy?


((Buddy aren't you my impersonator?))

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//same thing, can we work together?, wait i just thought of this. What if i found a Nite Owl model? :mrgreen:

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Mikhail Zhukov wrote:
//same thing, can we work together?, wait i just thought of this. What if i found a Nite Owl model? :mrgreen:


((Lol sure.))

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Kei comes across the small book somehow and leaves a note.

You seem like an intresting person, Rorschach. I'd very much like to meet you in person, but due to your current situation it may not be possible.
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Rorschach closes his book after writing the entry on March 14th, 2009 and thinks to himself for a moment about tonight's events. "Doctor actually saved my life. Didn't want reward. No money. He let me go. I'm surprised, people not as dark creatures as I thought? Trust...? No way... Not yet..."

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((Updated once again after my alleged "death."))

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Rorschach wrote:
((Updated once again after my alleged "death."))


// More like "Entry #1, a Rorschach died tonight in Nuke City"

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((Lol nah. I would have done that if I was in a league of heroes and one of us died haha.))

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GOD THAT MOVIE WAS GREAT!!!!


And the journal entries was like topping on the cake. AMAZING.

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